Homesick - Understepping

The sound of dripping rain caressing 
Damp scenery overjoyed the cling
The yearn brought me home to the old times
Blend yearn through under-stepping rhymes
Carry the sway along even hard
Smother the taste, touched sense deeper in

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mwiti Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 7:34 AM
I LUV THIS PIECE
Widjanarko Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Thanks Allan pleasured to see your comment :D, hug, yanny
Williams Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Yanny I like this , you too are into this puzzle form...David
Widjanarko Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Thanks David, I just tried to explore through these words :D glad that you like it :D
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