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Without her love I am supine and catatonic resting energy E=mc2 squared Mantra of melanin black and white we blend together The consequence of making love is Olympism Proverbial softness sensibility and discernment our internal systems burn when I kiss her dark skin Force of body strength of reason together we balance When we unite we are perpetual a complete human being an erotic explosion of light...

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Date: 11/20/2013 6:50:00 AM
captivating free verse, ken. I'll take a cue from your creative write. Thanks for sharing, Friend, JM
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/20/2013 7:09:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Thank you for stopping by for this one. Ken
Date: 11/19/2013 12:19:00 PM
the blend of two spirits into one amazes me.. what a tender, unifying feel, ken.... symbiosis at work!..:) huggles
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Date: 11/19/2013 12:22:00 PM
Hi Nette, thank you kind lady! Ken
Date: 11/17/2013 6:38:00 PM
the last several lines really make the beauty of this piece shine...a sensually beautiful write :) hugs
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:57:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you for the comment! Ken
Date: 11/17/2013 6:17:00 PM
Passionate work..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:22:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you for dropping by! Ken
Date: 11/17/2013 4:00:00 PM
- Love is not complicated .... open hearts, lust, tenderness, feelings .... beautiful poem, Ken! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:22:00 PM
Hi Anne, thank you for the beautiful visit! Ken

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