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Homemade Salsa

Tomatoes fried whole till dark
                                             Peppers friend with them
                                               With cilantro and onion 
                                              Now blend this great mix
                                                     Add a little salt
                                                      My mouth now
                                                            Craves






Written by Wayland Bunch 2/1/2013 

Ok I like experimenting but this form is a little too forced. I have syllable count and content already decided. It was trying experiment anyway and a learning experience.

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2013 3:01:00 PM

I saw this form before and wanted to try it out, but I never gave it a shot. It's interesting to say the least, but you're right about it being kinda limited. But it's good for you to experiment anyway, because (even if in a very small way) it will inevitably help you with your writing!