Homemade Dressing

When eating leftover dressing
That was a good main course for lunch
Only compliment  receiving
You could patent this honeybunch

He forgot potato salad
Left it out of his extra praise
What Rocky did say nots valid
For he was in a state of craze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/27/2010 2:22:00 PM
If that be the dressing a turkey be stuffed with, I am of the same opinion as is Mr. Rocky, but how could he be forgetting the potato salad? Hey! This guy be craze! Got a chuckle out of this one. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:11:00 AM
I ate a big plate full!! Doesn't that compliment the chef!! It was all good!! You are the best dressing maker EVER!!
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:49:00 AM
Funna and mouthwatering write, Sara! Have a nice week!...Gert
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Date: 7/26/2010 10:55:00 PM
Smile ~ "If all we see or seem is but a dream within a dream," scream, and break those wiliwaws panes ~ Smile, very reflecting amid a touch of humor dear lady ~ And yes, I am sure Rocky has now been a bit more aware in regards unto the things he praises and or not, and also, those things in which he does sometimes eat....Smile, "Lovely Sara" ~ "My Love Always to You," John! ~ "Have A Beautiful Night Dear," Bye!:) ~
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Date: 7/26/2010 7:01:00 PM
my mouth watered in reading this poem...enjoy it so much...^_^ v
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:04:00 PM
Awe, this is a delightful read from start to finish, I would have only had room in my tummy for one or the other... :-) Sounds Like your Rocky loves his dressing. Thank you Sara for sharing the read and for your most welcome comments. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 7/26/2010 2:24:00 PM
It sounds good until you get to the potato salad. Enjoyed your poem Sara, but it seem as if your husband went craze of it..have a nice one,..p.d.
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