Homeless Emptiness

Forced into grumbling stomach and head throb
It is dark cold emptiness all around
first laid off and then dissmissed from the job
It is a blight on all our light and sound

The wrinkled hours on my both cheek sunken
Driven out from two rented rooms, roaming
Hope hearth home health heaven hell all broken
For food morsels with dogs in the trash bin

Fallen crumbled plundered you all despise
One of our two children is now missing
Wreckage breakage drainage in our void eyes
Moans and groans around the serpent hissing

With our pulverised waves and hungry soul 
We are struggling to get back into whole 
Vultures on our head and the end hems in
Of your poem, O life, we’re still dreaming
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23/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:04 AM
The homeless poem, the homeless as a poem and the poem escaping the vulture. I like that, Kai
Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you very much ...
Rycroft Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Good take on homeless well done Probir x
Gupta Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:35 AM
sorry for the delay in response ... it escaped my notice ... Thank you so much for your appreciation ...
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October 24, 2016 at 7:55 AM
This is fabulous, the imagery & sentiment superb, love that last stanza. Lots of stiff competition for this contest, sounds like a winner!
Gupta Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 2:42 AM
Descending into the soul of the unfortunate you describe so vividly the real state of their existence dear , Probir! A great achievement. A seven.
Gupta Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:09 AM
Thank you ...
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October 23, 2016 at 7:54 PM
You paint a gripping and moving picture of homelessness with this poem, Probir.
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October 23, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thank you ...
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October 23, 2016 at 7:01 AM
- Touching and beautifully written, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Thank you ...
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