Homeless

In old rags
Biting cold winter night
Sleeping in footpath
Under open sky
Uncared for
Abandoned
No emotions ~
Only Silence



Date: 01/15/2021
Submitted for: 20-Word Max - Do It With Feeling Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 8:48 AM
I agree with Harry's comment below, an excellent write which Governments all over this Planet called Earth should read. Maybe the people should govern for the people, or maybe the millionaires should not have to pay high taxes, but be compelled to contribute to an appointed administration which is not corrupt and which could help the needy and destitute. Write on the dear friend, an excellent write, congratulations! Love and hugs, Jenny.
Horsman Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 10:14 PM
In todays so called society, there should be no such thing as , homeless..each case should be analysed by local authorities, and actioned appropriately.. Keep up the good work, with this a telling poem..Anitha, yes there is enough money collectively in the world to help these people.
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:10 AM
this is very very good, Anitha. How did I miss this one? Congratulations.
Lawrence Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Ani, So true...so very sad I cry with injustice of it all. I want to help each and every one of them... Powerful poignant poem. Susan
Bayles Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:12 PM
I like this poem, Anitha. Very stark. Very chilling.
Mitra Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 12:47 AM
Sad that there are so many homeless people out there....Congrats on your win Anitha and a very valid topic in this day and age.
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 8:28 PM
Ooh! This is powerful -- a powerful portrayal, and a powerful indictment of us as a society that such a portrayal is instantly recognizable. Congrats on your win in the contest. A FAVE for me, Ani. :) gw
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:59 PM
such a shame in this day and age that people are homeless:-( many congrats xx
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 11:22 AM
How the homeless survive, I don't know , but they have the will. Enjoyed reading, Anitha, and thank you for your kind remarks. Hugs Eve
Seeker Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:26 AM
A dark, stark reality drowned in deafening silence of apathy
James Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 4:04 AM
Is getting worse and it shouldn't be in the 21st century. Your poem says it all. Emilia.
Downing  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:08 PM
So very sad, and yes many are having difficulties and became homeless. So very sad to see them uncared for. Just heartbreaking!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Such deep emotion in this poem. ~~
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