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Raindrops 2 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Jcb Brul

Date: 02-07-2024

Honourable mention 

Agitated by the plight Of the famine hit earth, As a sign of consolation, Tears shed by the clouds Come down as raindrops From the sieve of the sky Clattering on windows, Thumping on roofs… A musical concert For the living, below! Plopping in puddles, Forming brooks and creeks, Soak every land They come across, With love, unbiased! Just like the separated souls Reunite with the Supreme Soul, Raindrops do descend to become One with their source! A homecoming for them!!

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Date: 7/14/2024 11:24:00 PM
"Agitated by the plight Of the famine hit earth, As a sign of consolation, Tears shed by the clouds Come down as raindrops" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:00:00 PM
they do soak unbiased, beautiful thought dear poet. happy writing, congratulations.
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