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Home Sweet Home

Haven for my weary soul, On a beach beside the sea. Mystical and magical as Every home should be. Safe, secure, serene, Waiting at end of day. Eagerly anticipated in Each and every way. This is the place I'll stay. Home is where my heart is. Ocean at my feet. My life, content and happy. Every dream complete.

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Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/1/2012 6:26:00 PM

This is wonderful AND it rhymes all the better! This is definitely the type of poem that should be framed and in everyone's home <3

Don Johnson

Date: 6/1/2012 3:38:00 AM

home is where the heart is, life serene can be, with Francine the sweetest, personality...

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/29/2012 9:45:00 PM

lovely work you have penned

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/29/2012 10:58:00 AM

ACROSTICS aren't easy to do, but you succeed brilliantly with this one. It flows so sweetly, and it rhymes! You would never know... BRAVO Francine!! Best wishes, Keith

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/28/2012 11:43:00 AM

well constructed

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/27/2012 10:33:00 PM

beautiful, dont get too much sand in the house lol

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/27/2012 9:42:00 PM

Reading this reminded me of Elizabeth Taylor in "The Sandpiper". Very pretty collection of words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2012 7:56:00 PM

you are so lucky if you live by the sea. I would love that, Francine. WEll, I think I have left a comment to nearly ever person I admire here on Soup today!! hope I did not forget anyone. Have a lovely Memorial Day. Andrea

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/25/2012 9:26:00 AM

thanx 4 the soup mail, sowi i cnt sent 1 bk bt i cnt as am working 4rm my phone 2day. Il take your advice .

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/24/2012 11:08:00 PM

brilliant poem. I am currently away from hme . When read this memories of my hme came flashing bk.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/23/2012 5:52:00 PM

Marvelous verse! Always Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2012 1:08:00 PM

Beautiful written Francine, complete poem.Home is where you story begins. - oxox Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/23/2012 12:11:00 PM

You are so lucky Francine to live by the Pacific and I know how beautiful the area is. Yes, home sweet home --there is nothing like home no matter where we roam. EXCELLENT. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/23/2012 12:07:00 PM

Beautiful Francine, I think the ocean's music is like a lullaby and cradles the listner in its voice. So glad you are fortunate enough to have this sound to listen to.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/23/2012 11:21:00 AM

it must be lovely to live by the sea! your poem has captured its joys very well...

David Williams

Date: 5/23/2012 2:01:00 AM

Francine sounds a great home ..David