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The Bleeding Roses (Salvidor Dali)

 

 

vivacious roses pose in air oxygen free from the stem arising like balloons resurrection of rosies blushing brides at peak before their spoiling before their mistreat their passionate gowns sweet wormy stems await greening apples Eden’s eschew the ladies wave bye-bye preferring the troposphere fear of flying ain’t there angels, palms up, invite their climb up golden stairs heaven is a lighthouse waves crash on dry and crusty land petals fall like rain dowry to the grooms wives look nothing like the brides kites tied to home soil desperate for heaven a few grooms smooth the bed water the roots the rose thrives 2/24/2021
*Salvidor Dali’s Bleeding Roses

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Date: 9/2/2024 6:45:00 PM
This may be beautiful, but it's painful...your gift shines
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Date: 3/14/2021 9:36:00 AM
So beautifully written, Kim. You paint a lovely poetic picture.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2021 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 2/26/2021 9:48:00 AM
Seductively and superbly composed, almost like a piece of music played by an orchestra for Salvidor Dali's Bleeding Roses. Blessings and hugs,Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2021 1:40:00 PM
What a lovely comment! Thank you so much, Jennifer!
Date: 2/24/2021 4:59:00 PM
so much imagery and what gorgeous pictures. Great tribute to Bleeding Rose
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 2/24/2021 1:48:00 PM
Really cool Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 2/24/2021 12:15:00 PM
- An excellent poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, sweet one! :)
Date: 2/24/2021 9:50:00 AM
Ooh, is this ever creative, uplifting, and downright 'beckoning to me,' Kim. Wonderful poesy. A FAVE for me! May you have a rosy Wednesday! : ) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugsy :)
Date: 2/24/2021 9:34:00 AM
Your imagination is outstanding, dear Kim. The picture great. I refer to the roses.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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