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The Bleeding Roses (Salvidor Dali)

 

 

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vivacious roses pose in air oxygen free from the stem arising like balloons resurrection of rosies blushing brides at peak before their spoiling before their mistreat their passionate gowns sweet wormy stems await greening apples Eden’s eschew the ladies wave bye-bye preferring the troposphere fear of flying ain’t there angels, palms up, invite their climb up golden stairs heaven is a lighthouse waves crash on dry and crusty land petals fall like rain dowry to the grooms wives look nothing like the brides kites tied to home soil desperate for heaven a few grooms smooth the bed water the roots the rose thrives 2/24/2021
*Salvidor Dali’s Bleeding Roses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hind Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 6:45 PM
This may be beautiful, but it's painful...your gift shines
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Seductively and superbly composed, almost like a piece of music played by an orchestra for Salvidor Dali's Bleeding Roses. Blessings and hugs,Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:40 PM
What a lovely comment! Thank you so much, Jennifer!
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 4:59 PM
so much imagery and what gorgeous pictures. Great tribute to Bleeding Rose
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Fenn Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Really cool Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 12:15 PM
- An excellent poem, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, sweet one! :)
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Ooh, is this ever creative, uplifting, and downright 'beckoning to me,' Kim. Wonderful poesy. A FAVE for me! May you have a rosy Wednesday! : ) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Thank you so much! Hugsy :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Your imagination is outstanding, dear Kim. The picture great. I refer to the roses.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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