Home Safe

home safe

still here awake, waiting.
sleep evades me 
I write to you,
so quiet and dark 
a summer peace has grown 
around the house
Joey sleeps deeply in his bed

I write small homey things, 
all grand notions long since
toddled off to bed.
soon the sun will rise
above the forest.
in kingly fashion, it will glide 
over its devotees bowing
smiling at the pagan gratitude
for its return.

every moment is created
of love for you
I sit here and mould it into words
as a potter uses clay.
if I were, if I were…
dreams that are woven into
wishes that will one 
day come true.
good night dearest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breedt Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Wow, I really am moved. Your work is so deliciously intimate and damn cleverly crafted. There is meat on the bone. I read so much between the lines too and whats left unsaid is what keeps me reading on
Cresswell Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 12:50 AM
Love is a great muse. The man in the poem was out hunting for moose. It can be dangerous. Oh and Joey is my pup. You are very kind I really appreciate your encouragement.
Sivey Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 5:44 PM
This is a rather romantic and sentimental poem Patricia! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! Such an amazing write, Great Work!!
Cresswell Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 6:11 PM
I can be described as an unapologetic romantic. Thank you for enjoying my poem.
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