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The birthday party, a surprise,
Had lots of things to tantalize – 
A lovely house, delicious food,
A friendly host to set the mood…

Some dialogue with friends and kin,
The birthday gal’s elated grin
When, from the car, she looked about
As all of us let out a shout.

My favorite part, though, was to see,
Transcribed to view on a TV,
Home movies of the honored guest,
The past revived at our behest.

Most partygoers knew her then
And lived those mem’ries once again
But we don’t go back quite as far
So watching really raised the bar:

An eighth grade trip, a P.J. bash,
A backyard pool, with hose and splash,
The senior prom (and she the queen!),
A high school graduation scene.

To see my friend so very young
Gave background to the praises sung
And piled so high upon her plate
By all who came to celebrate.

As pals and family reminisced,
I saw a bit of what I’d missed
But I was thrilled to recognize
My younger friend, a sweet surprise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/8/2018 10:40:00 PM
What better way to celebrate the day?!!! I have a picture of me with long hair, high water brown corduroy pants and beatle boots.!!! What was I thinking???.....great write as always...80)
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Date: 3/5/2018 2:32:00 AM
Wonderful write..thank you so much for sharing Harriet Shea
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Date: 3/4/2018 4:36:00 PM
A lovely time! Love it! You captured the moment! Ahhh
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Date: 3/4/2018 4:00:00 PM
What a wonderful way to celebrate Ilene I bet you had such fun looking back and reminising:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2018 3:44:00 PM
So nice Ilene. I am a sucker for old photos and cling to memories of my own and my children's younger lives.
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