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Home Is Where the Heart Is...

Lets leave our own soil
lets meet half across the world,
Lets find Our homeland.


 
 Charma

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James Fraser

March 12, 2010 at 9:29 AM

Sweet tender poem Charmaine >> James

Marty Owens

March 10, 2010 at 10:50 PM

Yes lets!!!!! love your poem...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 10, 2010 at 4:50 AM

My first read of the morning and I have to say I love it Charmaine. I have been reading your poetry everyday and am glad you are posting more lately. I truly enjoy reading your writing please keep them coming. Love, Carol

The Fringe

March 9, 2010 at 5:56 PM

This made me stop and think briefly if we all could really do that. It was a nice thought, and I would if I could. Good write. David B

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 9, 2010 at 4:43 PM

Another lovely Senryu .. meeting in the middle is the best place for home to be.. a special choice of words from your gifted pen so full of luv and emotion... luv.. Linda-Marie

Gert W. Knop

March 9, 2010 at 3:04 PM

Yes, Charma, you name it. I have seen many countries and won't feeel feel really at home in any. The problem is if you are living in one place, you'll always miss others. I believe that is a fate and we'll have to accept it. Thank you for you comments on "Broken". I've never been tio Malta, only once to Cyrus on my way to Haifa. Have a good week...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2010 at 6:53 AM

NIcely done, Charma. A good one for our immigrants! Luv, Andrea

Tim Ryerson

March 9, 2010 at 5:13 AM

A senryu that says it all about heart and homeland, Charma...a true beauty for sure! Perfect 5-7-5 and I love the repeating 'lets' to start each line - Tim