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Long day but home safe. Visiting family in Minnesota was wonderful.

circling above clouds trouble’s first inclination reroute to memphis wait for hours and hours making headway - through my book 8/31/2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/2/2020 6:18:00 PM

Back again. Love this tanka... A little turbulence in Chapter 9, but fasten your seat belts -- and you'll be fine! Smiles for Free Air Travel Miles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2020 8:17:00 PM

Turbulence was my tummy in Memphis without any ribs...whaaaat! I ate at 3 a.m. LOL...

Silent One

Date: 9/2/2020 2:05:00 PM

I'm glad you got home safely and felt the poetic urge to express it...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2020 8:17:00 PM

Always... Thank you, dear friend!

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/2/2020 4:15:00 AM

That's quite a trip. I go to Minnesota every week for work.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2020 8:18:00 PM

Awesome! Such a pretty state! My son and family have lived there for a couple years. It is a joy to visit!

Belden Raiser

Date: 9/1/2020 1:07:00 PM

''Book'' saves the day, enjoyed this Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2020 3:26:00 PM

Yes!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2020 2:29:00 AM

- ... better late than never, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2020 3:25:00 PM

But tiring! Glad to be home.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2020 7:25:00 PM

crisp image about a tedious flight, kim.. you were out of town?.. stay safe and be well.. huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2020 3:25:00 PM

Yes! Went to visit my son and family. We were supposed to go to Minnesota in March.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/31/2020 6:27:00 PM

So glad you wrote 'my book' at the end (i/o 'Facebook'). Whew! One vote for Sanity... Great Tanka, Kim! Reading and Remembrance, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 6:49:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/31/2020 12:55:00 PM

Glad you had a nice trip Kim, hope you've caught up on your sleep now. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 6:49:00 PM

Maybe...lol!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/31/2020 11:41:00 AM

Nothing quite like a good read from a book rather than some digital device! Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 6:50:00 PM

Yes :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/31/2020 10:43:00 AM

glad you made it home at last, kim! nice description of your trip back...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 7:00:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 6:50:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene!

Ryan J. Mccabe

Date: 8/31/2020 9:41:00 AM

There's nothing so satisfying as a good read, I concur. Nice piece, well done. Salut!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 6:51:00 PM

Thank you, Ryan! Salut! :)