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An explosion occurred at the nearby car plant In a road where my son often jogs He isn’t today, he says that he can’t Cos it’s raining Datsun cogs. 30 December 2021 For contest: Weather Poetry Sponsor: Angela Tune

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2022 6:10:00 PM

Datsun cogs -- the color of frogs. (Used to have a green Datsun back in the day. Burned oil too! lol). :) gw

Terry Flood
Date: 1/3/2022 3:23:00 AM

Gershon, my friend, you have a masterful talent for leaving comments that are almost impossible to respond to. But please don’t change…. They always make me laugh. Terry

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/31/2021 2:52:00 PM

Cute one. Love it. God bless you this New Year 2022. Love, Gina

Terry Flood
Date: 12/31/2021 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Gina.You have a great new year too. Terry

Deb M

Date: 12/30/2021 11:54:00 PM

Funny and clever again Terry! Don’t make a habit of this!! Really enjoyed! Cheers Debx

Terry Flood
Date: 12/31/2021 3:14:00 AM

Thanks, Deb. Glad you enjoyed. Terry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/30/2021 2:59:00 PM

I enjoyed this clever poem Terry. Cars have certainly changed over the years, blessings for a wonderful new year. xxoo

Terry Flood
Date: 12/30/2021 3:02:00 PM

I fear Tom is right and many will say, ‘Er, what’s a Datsun?’ C’est la vie. Have a great new year, Connie. Terry

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2021 12:39:00 PM

Lol, good one Terry, I bet many won't get it though, we used to have a datsun cherry then they changed the name to Nissan. Happy New Year, we're staying at home this year, its not worth the risk. Tom

Terry Flood
Date: 12/30/2021 1:47:00 PM

Aha, apparently, Datsun as a brand was reintroduced in the 80s but killed off again. Of course, my punchline is way older even than that…. Hmm what to do, what to do… explanatory note or something new… I’ll think on it. ;-)

Terry Flood
Date: 12/30/2021 1:37:00 PM

I once had a Nissan Sunny…. As soon as I went over 70 the entire body shell would undulate cos it was like tin foil. I had a feeling that Datsun was still Datsun in the States… maybe I’m wrong. I’ll visit Mr Google. Cheers Tom. Have a great new year. Terry