Home

It has been a long summer Days have passed and ones begun And now, today, in your arms At last, when leaves have fallen, Standing at the station. Waiting while moments pass. With your arrival, begins the day. Our eyes meet, then our lips. I am home at last.

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/6/2009 8:01:00 PM

Lovely write! Congratulations on your featured write! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/6/2009 7:42:00 AM

Hello Reem, I really admired your well architectured HOME. Congratulations on having featured this week. Brother in poetry, Ernilando

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/4/2009 4:43:00 PM

Beautifully written, The greatest feeling of being in love is recognizing that when that person is gone, you have this emptiness inside until you see them again and at last, you are HOME. I could feel this so strongly inside..So sweet and romantic..Congratulations on having this well deserved write featured this week..God Bless*Tyesha

Brandee Augustus

Date: 3/4/2009 12:33:00 PM

I like that you connect a loving relationship to feeling at home. It something practically every woman would want to hear! Nice poem.

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/4/2009 7:08:00 AM

Reem I reckon that there is no better feeling than that especially were I always came home from - wonderful "Real Life" poem - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2009 6:23:00 AM

Beautiful write, Reem. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/3/2009 1:03:00 PM

"Home" is where the heart is. Congratulations Reem on "Home" being featured. Vince

Sue Mason

Date: 3/2/2009 2:33:00 PM

Coming home is always a precious time and you have surely captured that in this wonderful write Reem. Congratulations on your writing be a feature this week here at the Soup!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2009 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Reem. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/2/2009 6:11:00 AM

Warmest congrats Reem on your beautiful featured write. Love, Shar

Date: 3/1/2009 5:37:00 PM

What a sweet poem with an uplifting end. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/2/2008 6:45:00 PM

This is gorgeous! Such a sweet romantic poem!....Good job...Carrie