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When fire dies, it remains ash, cover it up When the day dies, new day shows up When husband rest, leaves a sowed love Widow cries, dwells with grieve And loneliness "He has slept, he forever sleeps" A countless times, she vends And at the buttock, she feels the world And the need to go with him raises up Unreturned journey lacks partnership The sowed love dies not Abides within loves heart. Inspired by a book,

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Date: 10/5/2016 6:51:00 PM
you put so much emotion into this write. AM... always a pleasure to read. linda
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Date: 6/3/2016 1:20:00 AM
Beautiful write Afolabi, this is so sad yet so beautiful, hope you are well, take care......Vera
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:55:00 PM
Dear AM, It,s superb. Ur writing is enriched with powerful thought. 7 from me ..........hugs
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Date: 4/10/2016 2:05:00 PM
True love grows strong roots, Afolabi! This poem comes from the heart....lovely, although also sad! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/9/2016 9:49:00 PM
A lot of feeling in this one, Afolabi. Very nice.
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Date: 4/7/2016 10:12:00 AM
A very touching write indeed. Thank you for sharing **RON**
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 4/7/2016 7:52:00 AM
A moving verse!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 4/12/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Sir

Book: Shattered Sighs