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Please 
                                          tell me
                                         that I'm
                                     here to see my
                                  mom after this four
                            years without any calls came
                       starving, lonely, alone, abused, ruined
                   by the unfair world, went to the other land
             perhaps,finally, the fortune was there,would be there
                             I nurtured them, I served for 
                             their demands, I just need is
                             to pay me back,  but without
                             knowing,  oh why it would be
                             I just dream to escape to the
                             tale of poverty,but they treat
                             me as awful as vagabond cat
                             hit my thin, rough skin until I
                             see one light,o tell me please
                             m I at home?want to go home

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2015

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Anthony Pabon Date: 8/2/2022 8:54:00 PM beautiful imagery! it captures the reality of a home.. Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 6/14/2015 11:47:00 AM I hope you find your home from where you'll never roam. And know that it is there within your heart. Be it gable or a dome, be it wood or Styrofoam. May you never be alone or be apart. Peace. :) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/23/2015 8:06:00 AM We all need a home. I would never want to go back to the destructive home of my childhood. I am glad that with God, my wife and son, I have been gifted a peaceful home. This is a emotion filled house you have built with your words. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/23/2015 10:31:00 AM God bless u Richard

Emile Pinet Date: 4/19/2015 8:41:00 AM The simple words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/22/2015 2:21:00 AM ty happy to see ur comment

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 4/15/2015 7:55:00 PM Such a poem beautifully constructed on shape then the simple words used marked a thorough yearning to be belong.. heart melting poem!~olive eloisa Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 4/14/2015 10:20:00 AM Hope you get your wish; a beautiful piece of poetry. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/14/2015 6:24:00 AM - Elai, nice to see you back :) - A great poem ...... home sweet home :) - Hope you soon get home to your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/14/2015 6:48:00 AM thanks Anne

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/14/2015 12:18:00 AM hi elai.. nice to see you here again with this poignant work.. i know you miss home.. just wish you can come back!.. huggs! Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/14/2015 6:22:00 AM hu Net ... miss yah a lot :) Nette Onclaud Date: 4/14/2015 12:18:00 AM good shape form!

Cona Adams Date: 4/13/2015 7:59:00 AM I love your concrete poem. Written a few of them myself. Fun to read. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/13/2015 8:04:00 AM thanks ")