Elai Cee Poet Free verse

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Please 
                                          tell me
                                         that I'm
                                     here to see my
                                  mom after this four
                            years without any calls came
                       starving, lonely, alone, abused, ruined
                   by the unfair world, went to the other land
             perhaps,finally, the fortune was there,would be there
                             I nurtured them, I served for 
                             their demands, I just need is
                             to pay me back,  but without
                             knowing,  oh why it would be
                             I just dream to escape to the
                             tale of poverty,but they treat
                             me as awful as vagabond cat
                             hit my thin, rough skin until I
                             see one light,o tell me please
                             m I at home?want to go home

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Anthony Pabon August 2, 2022 at 8:54 PM beautiful imagery! it captures the reality of a home..

Robert Johnson June 14, 2015 at 11:47 AM I hope you find your home from where you'll never roam. And know that it is there within your heart. Be it gable or a dome, be it wood or Styrofoam. May you never be alone or be apart. Peace. :)

Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2015 at 8:06 AM We all need a home. I would never want to go back to the destructive home of my childhood. I am glad that with God, my wife and son, I have been gifted a peaceful home. This is a emotion filled house you have built with your words. Elai Cee April 23, 2015 at 10:31 AM God bless u Richard

Emile Pinet April 19, 2015 at 8:41 AM The simple words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile. Elai Cee April 22, 2015 at 2:21 AM ty happy to see ur comment

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 15, 2015 at 7:55 PM Such a poem beautifully constructed on shape then the simple words used marked a thorough yearning to be belong.. heart melting poem!~olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser April 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM Hope you get your wish; a beautiful piece of poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 14, 2015 at 6:24 AM - Elai, nice to see you back :) - A great poem ...... home sweet home :) - Hope you soon get home to your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Elai Cee April 14, 2015 at 6:48 AM thanks Anne

Nette Onclaud April 14, 2015 at 12:18 AM hi elai.. nice to see you here again with this poignant work.. i know you miss home.. just wish you can come back!.. huggs! Elai Cee April 14, 2015 at 6:22 AM hu Net ... miss yah a lot :) Nette Onclaud April 14, 2015 at 12:18 AM good shape form!

Cona Adams April 13, 2015 at 7:59 AM I love your concrete poem. Written a few of them myself. Fun to read. Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 8:04 AM thanks ")