Srinivas Veepuri Poet Pleiades

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Date: 07/09/2023

H Or R Pleiades Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Joseph May

Placed 1st

Home

Hospitality’s nest 					
Humanity’s domain 
Harmony, its nature                        			
Happiness, its address
Hostel, no match for it
House is brick and mortar						
Home is heaven on earth

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Janice Canerdy September 8, 2023 at 5:35 AM Srinivas, your metaphors are superb! A big CONGRATS on your win! Janice Srinivas Veepuri September 8, 2023 at 10:08 AM Janice Canerdy, you enjoyed the poem. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2023 at 1:52 AM - Congratulations on your win ... lovely written :) - Srinivas Veepuri September 8, 2023 at 10:05 AM Thank you for your appreciation, Anne-Lise Andersen.

Kim Merryman September 7, 2023 at 5:36 PM Beautifully said, Srinivas! "House is brick and mortar, Home is heaven on earth" I love those lines! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Srinivas Veepuri September 8, 2023 at 10:03 AM Kim, thank you for your compliment.

Joseph May September 7, 2023 at 3:49 PM Lovely write, Congrats on your win Srinivas Veepuri September 8, 2023 at 9:59 AM Thank you, Joseph May.