Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Noises
Love language

Uproar of tongues fades
As evening pours calm stars
Kids hug between creased pillows

' Warmth cradles hearth tamed by kinship'


Joseph May’s Pyramid Contest
9/17/2020

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Paula Goldsmith September 22, 2020 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your win. Love your poem and picture. Looks like the kids had a ton of fun. To be that age again. Enjoy your win...................

Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2020 at 6:55 AM Congratulations my dear friend on your wonderful 1st placing. Very well penned. Hugs and blessings Nette, Jennifer. Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2020 at 6:56 AM I LOVE YOUR PHOTO!

Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 11:12 PM Lovely family bonds...Congrats Nette on your win.

Anisha Dutta September 20, 2020 at 9:58 PM So touchy. Congrats Nette to win First place.

JC Brul September 20, 2020 at 6:17 PM Very heart-warming piece! Congratulations, Ms Nette on your awesome WIN! I miss home!

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 1:34 PM If only it were this way in every home. All children need this kind of home to grow up in. Wonderful verse, Nette. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 12:32 PM - Home love ... enjoy it, Nette :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 11:39 AM Home sweet home, Wonderful write Nette..Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 10:49 AM Love your photo for the prompt....congrats on the 1st. Jeanne :D

Robert L. Hinshaw September 17, 2020 at 11:02 AM Beautiful poem and splendid picture accompanying it nette. A top winner for the contest for sure! - Bob

Tom Cunningham September 17, 2020 at 3:12 AM Perfect pyramid Nette, are you Egyptian by any chance? Good luck Tom