Homage To a Life

MY skies are turning grey, there's silence in the air..
    The clouds are weighing heavy, especially in my eyes...
    My days are passing quickly by, the years have almost gone..
    Where are those sunny, summer days that were going to last forever..
    When hope was Spring of things to come and ambition drove my youthful life..
    But now the Winter fills the air and chills me to the bone..
    The evening light is fading and the road ahead is closed..
    There's nothing left of aspiration it's laying scattered at my feet..
    With forlorn hope and a future  full of scorn..
    You see I'm getting old and getting in the way..
    I'll be tomorrow's shadow sitting in the dark, or lonely in the park..
    Just like the ugly duckling but going in reverse..
    From being strong and healthy, to weak and hard of hearing..
    My tree of life is failing, the leaves so brown and withered..
    They fall and dance upon my Autumnal grave..
    I'm wrinkled to my sagging skin and chaffed beyond belief...
    My trunk is riddled with disease, the drugs will dull the pain..
    These once strong arms are snapping in a gentle breeze....
    My time is nearly over, my legs are oh so thin, I'm sinking to my knees..
    The Winter wraps it's frozen shroud around my weakened body..
    But just before I go to sleep, I smile and think of you...
    Oh my love, my precious gift, my very special moment...
    Perfection of the beautiful kind, the angel of my dreams...
    A love so true and tender, that kept me warm on the coldest days...
    And now sends my contented soul to heaven......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/20/2012 12:49:00 PM
So true, this is just how I feel some days. Very well written poem. Any day I can get out of bed is a good day. Do not use drugs, though. My husband has been my angel.
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Stephen Blencowe
Date: 3/20/2012 2:51:00 PM
thank-you Joann..glad that you have a special person it makes such a difference to our lives
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