Holy Saturday

(after Giosue Carducci)

Yes, even youth seems new, this shiny day 
of joy. It's April, clean and green and clear! 
The bells are clanging, merrily, all the way 
to far-off hills, proclaiming Easter's here. 
Their echoes throng the vale, and seem to say, 
"We've seen off dark and fog for one more year!" 
The night is put to flight by smiling day - 
Farewell to stew and broth - bring wine and beer! 

We owe all this to our Unconquered Sun. 
He's flooding back with warmth and life and light. 
He promised us that He would win the fight 
and, even when it seemed that Dark had won, 
and He was at His weakest, spat on, shunned, 
we never doubted Him. And weren't we right?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/14/2017 2:38:00 PM
I like the poem.
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/17/2017 3:43:00 AM
Thank you very much!
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/14/2017 4:36:00 PM
Excellent observation, Doug! Thank you!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 4/14/2017 2:43:00 PM
: P Michael, you have it right - Old Man Winter is now in full flight to the south, while the spheres' music plays undaunted.
Date: 4/14/2017 1:01:00 PM
I like it how you here avoided the use of the names, and still managed to stay so close to the meaning and atmosphere of the original, it made me smile :) Also love the "clean green and clear". Just great, Michael!
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Michael Coy
Date: 4/14/2017 1:12:00 PM
Darren, you don't just say you like the poem - you offer some perceptive analysis. I love reading your reactions!
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