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Holy Grail of God's Light

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For: A Child of Light Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Suzette Richards

Mom at age 16, 1950
Our sight is obstructed by a wall and a shadow. 
          ~Nikola Tesla

O2 at 2L keeps Mother's skin
color healthy,
but she's frail, 
more frail each day she lingers 
in this world of shadows~
She holds the holy grail
of God's light and follows a path
illumined by love and grace,
powered by God's wind and golden sail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 8/1/2025 8:47:00 AM
Very spiritual Chetta. I enjoyed this one a lot. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 7/30/2025 2:19:00 PM
Creative winning work for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Sara K
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