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As an orange sun sets in the west Silhouetting the trees Flashes of orange and bright, bright white Sights eyes can not believe What were those flashes of orange And white so clean and bright Curiosity got my interest And covered all the fright As soon as next day's sun came up On a trek to explore In the woods and up the mountain This enigma can't ignore It was a long hard climb to the top But there were flowers blooming. In the shade, on the forest floor Seemed something was looming In fright I crept along the path Well beaten by creatures Mice, squirrels, and chipmonks footsteps Along the trail featured Then there asleep just outside a cave Wearing nothing but shoes White high top athletic pair An orange ape peruse Holy cow, it's bigfoot sound asleep Just inside the cave more High top athletic shoes bright white To keep them clean a chore Bigfoot began to move and stretch Behind a tree I hid He began to unlace his shoes And those big feet undid Augh!!! The odor that came from those Feet, I almost got sick He went down to the creek and washed Coming back really quick He threw the smelly shoes in the wash And powdered down some clean Danced away across the forest Awaking me from dreams Sponsor: Skat A (Poet, Destroyer A) Contest: Bigfoot (the contest) Written: April 20, 2015 Author: Sara Kendrick unfinished

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Date: 5/8/2015 4:31:00 PM
Hi Sara, Great picture. Great win. It was a fun and epic poem at the same time. Congratulations. Take care. Earl
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Date: 5/8/2015 3:12:00 PM
Hi Sara, congratulations on your nice win for your delightful, humorous Big Foot poem!
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:29:00 PM
A forever PS...... Sara, all I have to say is stunning from start to end. The best imagery. LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:23:00 PM
Hi Sara, thank you for supporting the BigFoot Contest. I had fun sponsoring and hosting this contest theme. Stop by the big foot blog. Under my sissy's Skat blog, titled "Welcome to Poetry Soup's Big Foot Tour." Enjoy the pics if you'd like. Congrats to you, Congrats to all on the list. BigFoot ~A Poet Destroyers contest~ Always & forever <3 LINDA<3
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Date: 5/8/2015 12:44:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations on the bigfoot contest. Judged by Poet Destroyer (aka LINDA) ....... SKAT love
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Date: 5/8/2015 10:49:00 AM
Love your wonderful story, I want to hear more.Congratulations on your win, a 7. : ~ ) blessings Eve
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Date: 5/7/2015 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 5/7/2015 6:51:00 PM
Congrats on the win Sara.
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Date: 5/7/2015 5:02:00 PM
Hey, Sara. Congrats to you. Way to go!!!
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:17:00 AM
this is great Sara gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:01:00 PM
Dear Sara, the first few verses had such wonderful imagery that I was mesmerized. Then, the Big Foot sighting! Oh my, where can he buy sneakers? People who claim to have seen the creature say it has a foul odor. Can't begin to imagine how its feet smell! Great work, Hon. Winning wishes and hugs for you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:03:00 PM
LOL, thanks for a good chuckle here, my friend
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:29:00 PM
haha, I can just see him dancing away with this big hairy smelly feet. Cute entry.
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:16:00 PM
A humorous and very entertaining write, Sara. I really enjoyed your creative work! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:14:00 AM
A funny, engaging read! A 7. Blessings for the contest, Sara. Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 4/20/2015 10:57:00 AM
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