Holocaust Haiku Eight
Work makes free, a lie
Notches on a sickle, a tally
Death's head obliterates
( Yes, I know that this is not a true Haiku, if we all follow the rules...5/7/5 words per line )
I chose to tweak the "rules" to make the grammar flow better with commas, etc,
If anyone objects, I am happy will delete this haiku. )
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