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poem submitted to "Horror" poetry contest, Seth Pina, sponsor, March 6, 2026

HOLLOWING

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First, it was the way the light refused to touch the hallway~ how the floorboards sighed beneath something unseen. Then came the whispers, not from walls, but from the space between them, syllables chewed soft and wet. You learned to ignore the fingers brushing your neck in the dark, the way your reflection sometimes blinked too slowly. But tonight, you wake to the sound of your own voice downstairs, laughing, while you lie perfectly still. And now you understand~ the house wasn’t haunted. You were the thing it was trying to keep out.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 6:09 PM
Strong imagery ~
Hind Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 10:52 PM
Amazing twist to this, Sara!! I will comment on more work tomorrow, if I can find time. It's late. Take care, :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Creative one filled with pull like a very scary movie. You've created one that is emotive and descriptive. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 6:03 AM
awww, thank you, Sara K. I don't typically do 'horror' but wrote this one for a contest. Enjoy your day, Sara B
Blanca Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 4:25 PM
excellent theme with surprise
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:37 PM
thank you!
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