Hollow-Cell

locked - cell

dark hides in my place
my vains are filled with ebony
cut me and find out

my inner peace is lost outside
i will drown you where you stand
i eat egg eaters

K.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 24, 2013 at 1:28 PM
oh, yes these comments are related towards an old stupid comment you left on the worm poem
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May 24, 2013 at 1:27 PM
you get the picture
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May 24, 2013 at 1:27 PM
very rude
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May 24, 2013 at 1:27 PM
and rude
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May 24, 2013 at 1:27 PM
extremely mean
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May 24, 2013 at 1:26 PM
very mean
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May 24, 2013 at 1:26 PM
it's mean
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May 24, 2013 at 1:26 PM
ok,,, now that i read the poem..it's not that funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:25 PM
positively funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM
positively funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM
extremely funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:24 PM
very funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:23 PM
2 funny
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May 24, 2013 at 1:23 PM
lol... this is funny..
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April 19, 2011 at 4:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kyle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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April 18, 2011 at 5:54 PM
A very interesting poem Kyle. Welcome to the soup
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