Hollow Queen

expression frozen with the snow cold touch
my mind weathers your winter shoulder
static whiteout on the edge of oblivion

the mirage intangible, virtually unattainable
a long distance romance fed by wishful thinking
our candied hearts branded with ex's and oh's

indulgence melting on your mouth, with one in the hand
this sweet goodbye solidifying our broken bond
a naked trunk, leaves scattered on autumn's wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 31, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Very interesting and awesome write, Brandon
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