Hollow Feelings

I feel Hollow
No trace to follow
Nany roads in front of me
Million doors are opened to me 
Feeling lost and confused
Temptations  cannot be refused
Emotions are to be born
Which makes me torn
A good life to live
A sacrifice to give
Then, I raised my head up to
the sky; I thanked the only one who
Is the one that would me afford
with uncountable blessings and boons
He is my Lord
who determined my fate
choosing the door is not late
He chose it for me when I was in the dark womb
He created us equal as the teeth of a comb
Why would we kill one another with sword?!
Our destination is already written
When we were through the umbilical cord
our mom's food we've eaten
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Awesome poem...
Aj Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:26 PM
thx :)
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