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Hollow Existence

Oh ! what hollow lives we lead Gazing at our screens Like robots on automation Avoiding human contact Losing touch with nature Basking in the sunlight Or submerging in moonbeams Dancing with the waves Or playing on the greens In the digital world We flirt with virtual lovers Far from reality Who are not what they seem Oh! What a facade What a hollow existence we live!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2024 11:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/29/2024 12:13:00 AM

Thank you Sara! I' m glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Your appreciation means a lot. Best wishes. :)

Tom Woody

Date: 12/17/2024 8:12:00 AM

Hey nice first post and welcome to PS!

Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/17/2024 11:07:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/24/2024 11:14:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/7/2024 10:21:00 PM

Hello Beata!! :) Thank you for reading my poem and your kind blessings. Much appreciated. :)