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Hollow Existence

Oh ! what hollow lives we lead
Gazing at our screens
Like robots on automation 
Avoiding  human contact
Losing touch with nature 
Basking in the sunlight 
Or submerging in moonbeams 
Dancing with the waves
Or playing on the greens 
In the digital world 
We flirt with virtual lovers
Far from reality
Who are not what they seem 
Oh! What a facade 
What a hollow existence we live! 

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Date: 12/28/2024 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
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Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/29/2024 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Sara! I' m glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Your appreciation means a lot. Best wishes. :)
Date: 12/17/2024 8:12:00 AM
Hey nice first post and welcome to PS!
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Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/17/2024 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
Date: 11/24/2024 11:14:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Susmita Mukherjee
Date: 12/7/2024 10:21:00 PM
Hello Beata!! :) Thank you for reading my poem and your kind blessings. Much appreciated. :)

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