Hollow

Hollow Drained of will Echoes of the past tease Reverberating off my soul absent ~~ Barren An empty husk Tears leave only dry stains Cracked and parched emotions Wither ~~ Useless End of the rope No savior in white pills Letting go, wanting the abyss Futile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2011 at 5:26 PM
It is FULL of HOLLOW imagery (is that called an oxymoron)? anyway, awesome!!
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 7:21 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Paula. The best to you if for Catie's contest. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2011 at 12:18 AM
Excellent stuff Paula!Enjoyed.
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