Hollow

hollow heart
every part
a brittle fragile
scrap of humanity
makeshift soul
breakable exterior
nothing inside 
hollow breakable fool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 23, 2010 at 8:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Chamonique. Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol
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April 22, 2010 at 1:52 PM
you judge too harshly....I hear a full heart, bleeding with hurt..Light & Love
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