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hollow

i clearly loved you more. if you had loved me you wouldve put in effort— we would’ve been together, only if you had loved me. you said you did, but that promise was as hollow as the way i felt in the end

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Date: 6/30/2025 3:45:00 PM
That raw ache of unrequited love truly stings. Your words perfectly capture the hollowness left behind by a broken promise. Powerful stuff.
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