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In stalwart meadows stout egress, god wiz ingress locum hope in spring Written: January 29, 2022 2nd Place Contest Winner NEWNESS senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2022 7:53:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2022 6:08:00 AM

Interesting! Had to look words up but very cool. A pretty poem. Congratulations, Sotto!

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/18/2022 4:49:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu, accompanied by a photo of radiant flowers. God bless you.

Sotto Poet
Date: 2/18/2022 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Beata, for taking the time to leave a comment and visit my page. It truly means a great deal to me.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/2/2022 8:39:00 AM

Lasaad, When I considered this I like how you suspended us from visiting the meadow in winter months, and in spring there will be a place for us..Delice

Valsa George

Date: 1/29/2022 9:28:00 PM

When the season shifts to spring, earth will be renewed with green meadows and lovely flowers

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 2:16:00 PM

Creative work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/29/2022 1:31:00 PM

Enjoyed the hope of spring, Lasaad.