Sotto Poet Poet Senryu

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Holiness

In stalwart meadows
stout egress, god wiz ingress
locum hope in spring 


Written: January 29, 2022

2nd Place Contest Winner


NEWNESS senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Christuraj Alex February 18, 2022 at 7:53 AM Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues February 18, 2022 at 6:08 AM Interesting! Had to look words up but very cool. A pretty poem. Congratulations, Sotto!

Beata Agustin February 18, 2022 at 4:49 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu, accompanied by a photo of radiant flowers. God bless you. Sotto Poet February 18, 2022 at 12:45 PM Thank you so much, Beata, for taking the time to leave a comment and visit my page. It truly means a great deal to me.

Delice Arleen Skelly February 2, 2022 at 8:39 AM Lasaad, When I considered this I like how you suspended us from visiting the meadow in winter months, and in spring there will be a place for us..Delice

Valsa George January 29, 2022 at 9:28 PM When the season shifts to spring, earth will be renewed with green meadows and lovely flowers

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2022 at 2:16 PM Creative work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit January 29, 2022 at 1:31 PM Enjoyed the hope of spring, Lasaad.