John Lawless Poet Cinqku

Holidays - Cinqku

HOLIDAYS-- Cinqku


Midnight
black Friday
turkey burping
tryptophan tornado
red ink

Church bells
echoing
remembrances
disturb the secular -
rebirth


John G. Lawless
11/9/2014

submitted - Dr. Ram Mehta – Cinqku Poem – Poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 11:09 AM you used very intelligent thinking and vocabulary, which made this one of the very best in my opinion. Congrats in the contest. John Lawless December 14, 2014 at 5:11 PM Thank you Andrea, comment appreciated, always nice to hear from you.

Brenda Meier-Hans December 11, 2014 at 8:31 PM Great contrast John. Congratulations on your win John Lawless December 14, 2014 at 5:10 PM Thanks Brenda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 11, 2014 at 4:30 AM Congrats on awesome winning write John! First place in my view, a perfect 7, hv a blessed day! John Lawless December 11, 2014 at 6:04 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma for your high praise.

Paul Callus December 10, 2014 at 9:26 AM Excellent contrasting images between the two stanzas, John. #7 Congratulations on a deserved podium finish! // paul John Lawless December 11, 2014 at 6:04 PM Thanks Paul, the contrast of the spiritual and the secular around Christmas has always set me thinking.

Jan Allison December 10, 2014 at 5:49 AM beautifully penned - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx John Lawless December 11, 2014 at 6:03 PM Thanks Jan always nice to hear from you.

Dr.Ram Mehta December 10, 2014 at 5:29 AM I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,John John Lawless December 11, 2014 at 6:02 PM Thanks again Dr. Mehta.