Krish Radhakrishna Poet Light Verse

Holiday Whistles

in recliner on sandy beach he went to sleep,
his faithful wife, sat by his side, began to weep,
all that money wasted on such a lazy cause,
his snoring whistles like sea waves play without pause!

3rd placement
Written 30/08/21
Milton L Hankins sponsored
Light Verse(2) contest
12 syllables each line
AaBb rhyme

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Beata Agustin September 24, 2021 at 1:55 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you. Krish Radhakrishna September 24, 2021 at 3:15 AM Thanks Beata! expensive snoring!:)

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2021 at 3:31 PM haha. I can sure picture this lazy dude. Congrats, Krish. WELL done. Krish Radhakrishna September 23, 2021 at 5:09 PM Thanks Andrea! one of many we see!:)

Sam Kauffman September 23, 2021 at 11:25 AM Not a very adventurous soul! I agree. Why take a vacation to sit and read a book when there are so many wonderful places to explore and things to see! We have friends who do just that and we have never understood! Congrats Krish! Krish Radhakrishna September 23, 2021 at 5:10 PM Thanks Sam!! exactly! I see people buying books before they go so they can read!!

Tom Cunningham September 23, 2021 at 10:19 AM All that money spent and he sleeps on the beach, he might as well stayed at home lol. Congrats on your win Krish. Tom Krish Radhakrishna September 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM True!! I see many sitting on the beech and reading a book! ??? why???

Christuraj Alex September 23, 2021 at 9:52 AM Beautiful Writing! Congratulations! Krish Radhakrishna September 23, 2021 at 10:08 AM Thanks My friend!

Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2021 at 9:38 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. Thanks for the laugh. I can see this. Have a blessed day................ Krish Radhakrishna September 23, 2021 at 10:08 AM Thanks Paula!! just the sheer fatigue of travelling I guess! but not very romantic!

Anitha Jayasankar September 2, 2021 at 11:29 AM Haha... thx for the smile Krishji... Enjoyed reading your light verse... God bless... ~ Ani Anitha Jayasankar September 3, 2021 at 4:11 AM I came to re-read this and am still laughing... Thanks for the humour Krishji... ~ Ani Krish Radhakrishna September 2, 2021 at 12:36 PM Thanks Anitha! God bless you too! Lovely to have you like my poem!