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Holiday Whistles

in recliner on sandy beach he went to sleep, his faithful wife, sat by his side, began to weep, all that money wasted on such a lazy cause, his snoring whistles like sea waves play without pause! 3rd placement Written 30/08/21 Milton L Hankins sponsored Light Verse(2) contest 12 syllables each line AaBb rhyme

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/24/2021 1:55:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the chuckle it creates. God bless you.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/24/2021 3:15:00 AM

Thanks Beata! expensive snoring!:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 3:31:00 PM

haha. I can sure picture this lazy dude. Congrats, Krish. WELL done.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/23/2021 5:09:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! one of many we see!:)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/23/2021 11:25:00 AM

Not a very adventurous soul! I agree. Why take a vacation to sit and read a book when there are so many wonderful places to explore and things to see! We have friends who do just that and we have never understood! Congrats Krish!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/23/2021 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Sam!! exactly! I see people buying books before they go so they can read!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/23/2021 10:19:00 AM

All that money spent and he sleeps on the beach, he might as well stayed at home lol. Congrats on your win Krish. Tom

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/23/2021 10:28:00 AM

True!! I see many sitting on the beech and reading a book! ??? why???

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/23/2021 9:52:00 AM

Beautiful Writing! Congratulations!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/23/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thanks My friend!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/23/2021 9:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. Thanks for the laugh. I can see this. Have a blessed day................

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/23/2021 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Paula!! just the sheer fatigue of travelling I guess! but not very romantic!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/2/2021 11:29:00 AM

Haha... thx for the smile Krishji... Enjoyed reading your light verse... God bless... ~ Ani

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/3/2021 4:11:00 AM

I came to re-read this and am still laughing... Thanks for the humour Krishji... ~ Ani

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/2/2021 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Anitha! God bless you too! Lovely to have you like my poem!