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***holiday Tag*** Thank You, Doris

Thank you Doris, for giving me the mic. I would like to welcome my father, to our poetry web site. Mr. Richard Pickett, Has a talent so sublime. wisdom within his rhymes, we've collaborated many times. You should check him out, you may come to find. Intriguing thought provoking, inspiration... come, journey through his mind. Thank you Doris, for giving me the mic. How about dem BRONCOS!!! Stuffing the Giants. on Thanksgiving, a win like that! Brian Dawkins a gift... Elvis Dumervil, D.J. Williams finding rifts, Defense inspired, the offense clicks. Yes, he said Broncos... Die-Hard, tattoo on his right arm. A stallion, poetry is my art. Thank you again, Doris. for giving me the mic I'm glad you "Went to Jared" Now I must step aside. I'm going to call for my "Sweetheart" You are next in Line Linda-Marie Bariana has been tagged for Phyliss Babcocks' "Holiday Tag"

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Date: 12/8/2009 1:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this one. So you are a football fan too--my Vikings fell hard Sunday. Hopefully, they'll get back on track. I want to see some playoff wins. Glad to have your Dad with us. I was wondering if you were related. You answered the holiday tag in style. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 12/3/2009 5:49:00 AM
The mystery of the Lone Wolf continues.. U have Soup Mail.. Oh A Savvy 1 ... "Sweetie"
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:49:00 PM
TWO Soup Mails 4 U ... "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:10:00 PM
Mr Pickett, Very good, I like it, cool, witty, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:37:00 PM
Great write here Jared and so witty....thanks for sharing..Mary
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:37:00 AM
Jared, I've already read some of your father's work. Even asked him if you were related. I see you share a talented gene for writing. Great tag! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:30:00 AM
Hi there.. glad your Dad is on board on the Soup.. his writes are interesting ... hope u enjoyed your days off... talk soon.. Highlander has been under the weather so he could not continue with the tag game when I tagged him but hopefully he will be back on track soon... just wanted to let u know.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/1/2009 2:08:00 PM
Hoorah... Like Father like Son, Go Saints....11-0... Boohaa. Can Dads Play this game? Well done son. I enjoyed it as I do all of your work. I am very proud of you. You have a gift I'd like to think I had a hand in... Well Done two thumbs up!!!!
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Date: 12/1/2009 1:28:00 PM
FYI Phyliss Babcock started the holiday tag. And good luck to your father. and thirdly try not writing poetry while watching the game. jhl
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:49:00 PM
Let's go and get them.you did!you got her!this game is fun,lets get it done:).regarding your dad,he's talented as much as his son..:).Charma
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:28:00 PM
check out the words to a song I posted.It's a good one called the climb.
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Date: 11/30/2009 4:46:00 PM
Too funny! enjoyed reading-thanks for playing along!!
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Date: 11/30/2009 4:03:00 PM
great one! Jared! hate to bust yer bubble! cuz Purple #4 is comin' atcha! brother!!!! go Vikes! jimbo
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:44:00 PM
Nicely done write for the tag and good selection on participant. Keep the magical lines flowing. I have read some of your father's work already. Great writer. Only didn't know he was your father but wonder if some relationship to you. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:01:00 PM
Soup Mail again.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/30/2009 12:20:00 PM
Good job Jared .. and I am glad u tagged me .. will check this out with Jimbo too.. glad u enjoyed reading Invaders.. got some flack feedback.. why don't u check it out again and let me know what u think about the comment made... did u check Soup Mail...today? "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:14:00 AM
Nice flow Jared, I read your father's "Winter" poem last night and I am in agreement with you. He does have wisdom in his rhymes...Raul
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