Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Cinquain

Holiday Goodies

Lonely 
                                       is the sugar.
                             Once worn to coat cookies
                     now just pinched and licked by fingers 
                                           In jar.

                                       12.29.2014
                          Contest: A Quentin Christmas

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Mama Bear January 6, 2015 at 6:06 PM Congratulations on the win. You are a very talented writer. Hugs Edith

Carrie Richards January 4, 2015 at 5:43 PM So true to life is this poem. I do believe I have a jar or two on my kitchen counter just like this !! Happy New Year, Brenda!

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2015 at 5:43 PM Brenda,, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Jan Allison January 4, 2015 at 4:12 PM Dropping back with my congrats Brenda I love your write so totally unique:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight January 4, 2015 at 3:57 PM Hi Brenda, congratulations on your win. Your poem was one of my favorites! Hugs, Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr January 4, 2015 at 3:45 PM I seem to keep complimenting you on this poem it sure has a long after life, congratulations Brenda

Paul Callus January 4, 2015 at 3:24 PM Congrats on this lovely Cinquain, Brenda; you would have placed higher had you left some cookies for the sponsor! All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2015 at 2:52 PM Brenda, this one is unique in my contest. The cookies all gone? DANG!! Congrats for the HM. Luv, Andrea

Eileen Manassian January 2, 2015 at 3:24 AM Congrats on this yummy POTD treat, Brenda. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid January 2, 2015 at 2:42 AM congratulations on poem of the day sweet beautiful piece dear friend

Marilyn Velez January 2, 2015 at 2:42 AM congrats :D

Dorian Petersen Potter January 1, 2015 at 8:35 PM Delicious pen Brenda! You came up with a very unique idea very dear friend. A 7 from me! Congrats on been chosen for Poem Of The Day! I wish you a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen January 1, 2015 at 6:41 PM I enjoyed reading your poem.very interesting and meaningful.Thanks for sharing.Wish you dear poet a happy new year 2015.God bless you and all. -Safa

Robert Stoner Jr January 1, 2015 at 4:29 PM Hi Brenda enjoyed this in my first read, congratulations for your Poem Of The Day selection

Alesia Leach January 1, 2015 at 12:56 PM Delicious!

David Meade January 1, 2015 at 12:03 PM Sweet Deal!! What a way to begin a new year . . . you are awesome my dear Brenda

Jan Allison January 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM a sweet delight of a poem and poem of the day - woohoo congrats and good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eve Roper January 1, 2015 at 10:39 AM Congratulations, Brenda, on poem of the day for the new year. Ginger Snaps were the treat for yesterday, it made the whole house smell good. 7++++ and good luck on the contest

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 1, 2015 at 10:31 AM Hooray! First poem of the day for 2015!! Congrats Brenda and Happy New Year...hugs, Rhonda

Sandra Haight January 1, 2015 at 9:20 AM A big congratulations to you, Brenda, for your poem selected POTD! I read it last night, and I loved it! A great one for the contest, and I am sure it will be on that list! Hugs, Sandra

Maurice Yvonne January 1, 2015 at 7:24 AM Congratulations to PoetrySoup they made a great choice choosing this gem as poem of the day. In fact the first poem of the day in 2015. How great is that?

Maurice Yvonne January 1, 2015 at 7:22 AM Great entry Brenda you just may have hit Andrea's sweet spot. Good luck in the contest.

Kayod5 Kayode January 1, 2015 at 6:22 AM Congrats Brenda,nice to see this beautiful Poem as POD, good luck in the contest...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2015 at 5:45 AM - Sweet and lovely, dear Brenda - Good luck in the contest - And .... Congratulations on P.O.T.D. !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode December 31, 2014 at 6:29 PM Happy new year Brenda...huggs

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