Gary Jones Poet Free verse

Holes

You

    Are

      A 

        Place

          To unload

You're a hole

    A warm tight hole

      That’s what you've become

        A dependable hole

          Knot in a tree

Truth is

    I need holes

      You're

        My

          Hole

© Copyrights G. Jones 2008

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Written by Mr. Squirrel

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Michael Jordan June 11, 2008 at 12:13 PM Gary I must admit I was lost until I read the author note then it all made sense - great job - very ingenious - blessings to you my friend

Sean Kelly June 11, 2008 at 11:19 AM Nuts !!! Rgds Mrs.Squirrel...... Good to see you back, Gary..... Unique , as ever....