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Holding Us

by Michael J Falotico the sky holds the rain.. the earth holds us up as toys.. we hold each other..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 9:18:00 PM

super M.J., i like what holds us together... but sadly it also makes us fall apart... in all kinds aways.....starting my way up on reading your poems. I will always enjoy take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 4/7/2011 4:11:00 AM

Very very Sweeeeeet :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/3/2011 10:33:00 AM

Very profound, Michael! You are creating some fine work. Where would we be if we didn't have friend to hold us? Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2011 10:12:00 AM

oh sweet darn,michael! the last line thew me off... watta wow! :) huggs, nette

Judy Konos

Date: 4/3/2011 8:11:00 AM

and await the Storm....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:49:00 AM

Happy Sundy Michael.. hope your day is bright.. as the sun is finally shining today.. elegant words to read before we are off to the airport waving bye to my youngest and his bride .. tears falling for Jersey Girl luv..

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/3/2011 5:56:00 AM

Michael, wow - that speaks volumes. excellent, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2011 3:46:00 PM

Any room for a "Sweetheart"? haha. these are simply amazing words Michael.. and lovely visual essence in every line holding the reader captive... like an embrace never wanting to let go luv.. your Jersey Girl in holding mode.. where is my honey poo?