Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Holding Us

by Michael J Falotico



                                                         the sky holds the rain..
                                                   the earth holds us up as toys..
                                                           we hold each other..

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Poet Destroyer A April 23, 2011 at 9:18 PM super M.J., i like what holds us together... but sadly it also makes us fall apart... in all kinds aways.....starting my way up on reading your poems. I will always enjoy take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

C.C Bloomsfield April 7, 2011 at 4:11 AM Very very Sweeeeeet :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 3, 2011 at 10:33 AM Very profound, Michael! You are creating some fine work. Where would we be if we didn't have friend to hold us? Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2011 at 10:12 AM oh sweet darn,michael! the last line thew me off... watta wow! :) huggs, nette

Judy Konos April 3, 2011 at 8:11 AM and await the Storm....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 3, 2011 at 6:49 AM Happy Sundy Michael.. hope your day is bright.. as the sun is finally shining today.. elegant words to read before we are off to the airport waving bye to my youngest and his bride .. tears falling for Jersey Girl luv..

Michael Jordan April 3, 2011 at 5:56 AM Michael, wow - that speaks volumes. excellent, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 2, 2011 at 3:46 PM Any room for a "Sweetheart"? haha. these are simply amazing words Michael.. and lovely visual essence in every line holding the reader captive... like an embrace never wanting to let go luv.. your Jersey Girl in holding mode.. where is my honey poo?

Joe Maverick April 2, 2011 at 2:28 PM Perceptive piece here Michael, well written!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2011 at 1:12 PM I love how you added in that part, that we hold each other, that is the plan of it all. good write!

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:40 PM After all that is all that matters, "the closeness I mean" okay that is just according to me ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2011 at 12:16 PM Got that right..Enjoyed reading your poetic creation this afternoon..Sara

James Fraser April 2, 2011 at 8:55 AM Love the comfort in the poem Michael, nice one. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Daver Austin April 2, 2011 at 8:17 AM Aint nature grand, human and otherwise. Good write, Mike. Love, Dave

Kash Poet April 2, 2011 at 7:59 AM Wonderful write Michael!Nice romantic ending.Enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my pages--kashinath