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Holding Precious a Treasured Dream

As the morning sun smiles warmly with colour upon you my love It's all around embraced within a circle kissing each and every single breath inside jumping heartbeats pop A moonbeam enters softly embraced your the light of destiny kissed beautiful rose shining gold gift wrapped Amazing with the dewdrops your sparkle dwells in the heart guiding this soul lovingly home I can see heaven in your eyes where chocolate melts like carmel into heartbeats golden honeycombed unrhymed tercets

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2016 5:03:00 PM

what a beautiful romantic poem Liam the imagery is divine:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/28/2016 4:53:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^