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a bluebird dives graceful sullen and dramatic as if performing its last swan song then in late afternoon gone the sun in backdrop tickles wispy clouds speechless i inhale the magic of an exquisite day of fall wishing it would never end AP: 1st place 2024 Posted on December 11, 2024

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Date: 12/31/2024 6:35:00 AM
Hi Line, you've put together a little piece of magic. God bless. xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/31/2024 6:09:00 PM
thank you so much, John ~
Date: 12/29/2024 3:26:00 PM
Wonderful little poem. Love the tickle line
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Date: 12/29/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea ~
Date: 12/12/2024 8:09:00 PM
Delightful, delicious imagery, Line. I can see why this earned 1st place. Beautiful! Thanks, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated comment, Gershon ~
Date: 12/11/2024 3:40:00 PM
delicious poem, essential moment, enjoyed
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2024 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Yann ~ much appreciated

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