Holding On

dried memory lost...river forgets to flow in desert...waits for rains longing turns debris...heart unlearns how to conjure...architect time bides
December 30, 2019 Contest : Ku Duet Sponsor : Silent One
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Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 7:58 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Subimal. Well done.
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:54 PM
Deep imagery, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:40 PM
- A beautiful ku duet, Subimal :) - Congratulations on a 2st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Profound..Congrats on your placement..
One Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:12 AM
very deep and emotive.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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