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Holding Back Tears

Why did you retain your tears hidden? Will the issues cease after they are bound?  Are the fountains close to stale down? Or has your whole life been destroyed? What fulfills your happiness every day? For all the suffering you've endured. Crying for the sake of making others cry. You're pretending on the inside, indeed. Are you aware of other people's misery and wish to attenuate their sadness? It's a considerable measure of certainty. You acquire if you discover happiness. Will you be able to overcome this adversity? The most unbearable of all was the sorrow. Endeavoring to climb a mountain endlessly. To forestall a potential deadly stumble hallow. I believe you must start working forward. After seeing others achieve greater success. Every other fresh morning brings a reward. As well as a willingness to energize and bless. Consider putting on your optimal performance. Never lose hope, even if your life is near its final. An excess void will never aid in one's ascendance. All you can do is act with sapience and be helpful.
1st Place contest winner Written: August 03, 2021 This or That, Vol 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Your Favourite Poem From 2021 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful tear story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Rose  Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 2:53 PM
You are a sapient poet who knows the true value of a tear. congrats Lasaad
Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Wow: first place. Congratulations.
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thank you so much, Victor; I appreciate your Congrats.
Alex Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Always, there's something new in you. Rich imagination.
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so much, Alex, I appreciate it
Agustin Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Wow!Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... your final stanza is a delight to me. God bless you.
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Thank you so much, Beata, for the Congrats and your nice words. Be blessed.
Ibeh Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Absolutely brilliant, Lasaad:-) Congratulations on your first place win in my contest!
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you so much, Edward, for the spark of this great contest and my placement. And thank you very much for the compliments and congrats.
Pandit Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Good advice for life and living, Lassad.
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay, your remark is so much appreciated
Skelly Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Sometimes holding back tears is next to impossible. Particularly when ~ quote: The most unbearable of all was the sorrow. Endeavoring to climb a mountain endlessly. This resonates...Delice
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much, Delice. Your kind words shed enchantment on my poem, and it's so much appreciated.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 2:45 AM
Self-examination is always necessary. I wrote a poem lately "Hope never Dies". Many read it, But many simply refuse to do so.
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:35 AM
You're correct, Victor; self-examination is necessary every time we cry. Thanks for your kind words
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 2:05 AM
A thought provoking write, Lasaad:)
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thank you so much, Jo, your remark is so much appreciated
Hankins Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 7:05 PM
Ah, so well-written and so meaningful. "Never lose...hope!" Your words are so telling, Lasaad. We all need this introspection. I think every time we cry, we need self-examination.
Poet Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 7:11 PM
That's so correct, Milton, every time we cry, we need self-examination. But not too many people do that. Thanks for your kind words, my good friend.
Roper Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Great rhyming poem, Lasaad. Good luck in Edward's contest.
Poet Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 6:35 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, dear Eve, it's appreciated.
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