Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Hold Up the Sky

A million little stars hold up the sky
Pinning it to the back of Neverland
A place where dreams come true
For those who can truly understand


For the Pick A Title contest 
sp. Edward Ibek
3/11/19

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Gershon Wolf March 28, 2019 at 9:21 PM 'The back of Neverland' -- just love that one. That must be way out there, somewhere over the rainbow, I suppose... ~ gw

Joseph May March 13, 2019 at 3:11 PM Very nicely done Barbara...best wishes in the contest.. Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2019 at 3:56 PM Thank you for stopping by. BG

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 13, 2019 at 2:57 PM I love this! Enchanting :) xomo! Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2019 at 3:57 PM thank you so much. Glad you liked it. BG

Chuck Melugin March 13, 2019 at 2:07 PM Barbara...Original and beautiful! Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2019 at 3:57 PM thank you for reading! ..BG

Line Gauthier March 11, 2019 at 9:54 PM Bravo, Barbara. This is wonderful. Barbara Gorelick March 13, 2019 at 3:59 PM Thank you so much! BG