Hold Up That Sword

Hold up that sword
when truth is violated...
don't destroy everything and everyone:
only evil must end for peace to survive!
Fight better than a warrior with a bloody urge
who seeks victory and revenge;
what satisfaction is there in being alive...
after all enemies are wounded and gone?
They would never learn love, but die tormented
as marthyrs, slaves and peacemakers have!


Hold up that sword,
by speaking your command
when peace is broken
and havoc spreads quicker than fire...
to bring all another dire:
remember Attila when he ransacked Rome?
Chalithra, have more compassion
towards mortified people who have been exploited:
you must explain to them that's wrong to be enslaved...
without having the vision of a place called, " Home. "


Barbarians were those who trashed everything
and killed, but they lived in different times:
violence against order and civility;
today there's another evil arising:
greed for power against truth and humility...
Chalithra, carefully choose your allies!


Character: Chalinthra

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/23/2012 10:44:00 AM
powerful write, andrew.... best winning wishes and huggs!
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:07:00 PM
Yes, another war IS brewing, you sure got that right, and this is a very nice poem, my friend.
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:05:00 PM
Wonderful, I think like then when I am playing Skyrim!
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Date: 5/21/2012 5:38:00 PM
Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing, Andrew! =Juli-Michelle=
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