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Hold Tight

Hold tight these lips of mine Keep still the secrets inside How would I explain " If " Ever my secret revealed But then why shouldn't I Why not shout it to the sun Whisper it to the stars A secret it would be no more I tremble with the anticipation Of holding you within these arms Of sharing the quiet times together Of tasting and savoring all of you These eyes know well the pleasures of your face The mind wonders of what the eye can not see As you pass, my sense's fill with the scent of your cologne I ache to know your musk of heated passions To feel the warmth inside you To touch your very soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2015 8:44:00 PM
this is a very delicious secret. The best kind, Debbie!! thanks for leading me to it. I could not even find it by scrolling down your list. I had to type it in at the top! I must be blind.
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Date: 9/15/2012 6:18:00 AM
"GULP!" Gosh, Debbie...you should have pinned a warning sign to this one; and old bard's heart can only take so much you know...wink* Beautifully rendered with stunning imagery to steal the senses of any red-blooded boy...you've taken your skills and gentle, romantic soul and composed the virtual sensually passionate and alluring masterpiece. Whew! My mouse's tail is on fire...LOL! Splendid work, M'Lady...absolutely! You sure do know about love and affection...MMmmm! Thank you, Debbie ~ Rascal
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/15/2012 11:40:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet words ;}
Date: 9/6/2012 3:45:00 PM
Ohhh Lala..nice one..erotic and well done..tastefully done ;) You go gal! Light & Love
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/6/2012 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Debbie ;} I wrote this back in 1992 -93
Date: 7/12/2012 2:41:00 AM
Nice.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/12/2012 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Edison ;}
Date: 5/2/2012 1:10:00 PM
Wheew this is a hottie alright Debbie, i must thank you for your great comment on the write of mine.
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Date: 5/2/2012 7:16:00 AM
Feel the passion in this write, another excellent write.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/2/2012 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Anthony,, I wrote it 1992,, have a great day ;}
Date: 4/27/2012 3:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Very passionate work..Glad that I stopped by.I don't know about that musk scent though.Sara
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Date: 4/27/2012 1:49:00 PM
...I can feel your beauty inside of me baby * You feel sooo beautiful ~ My love, John!:) ~
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:39:00 PM
Smile ˜ Ow Sweet Debbie, how fortunate to be loved by such lovely beauty ˜ Deep my beautiful lady ˜ Forever & for always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/21/2012 11:29:00 AM
Sweet and romantic love poem Debbie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/21/2012 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Annie ;} have a great day !
Date: 4/21/2012 5:08:00 AM
Nice love poem, you describe the desire so well.
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