Hold Tight

Hold tight these lips of mine 
Keep still the secrets inside 
  How would I explain   " If "
Ever my secret  revealed 

But then why shouldn't  I 
Why not shout it to the sun 
   Whisper it to the stars 

A secret it would be no more 
I tremble with the anticipation
Of holding you within these arms
Of sharing the quiet times  together
Of tasting and savoring all of you 


These eyes know well the pleasures
 of your face 
The mind wonders of what the eye 
can not see  
As you pass, my sense's  fill  with 
the scent of your cologne 
 
I ache to know your musk  of
heated passions 
To feel the warmth inside you
To touch your very soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:44 PM
this is a very delicious secret. The best kind, Debbie!! thanks for leading me to it. I could not even find it by scrolling down your list. I had to type it in at the top! I must be blind.
Jones Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 6:18 AM
"GULP!" Gosh, Debbie...you should have pinned a warning sign to this one; and old bard's heart can only take so much you know...wink* Beautifully rendered with stunning imagery to steal the senses of any red-blooded boy...you've taken your skills and gentle, romantic soul and composed the virtual sensually passionate and alluring masterpiece. Whew! My mouse's tail is on fire...LOL! Splendid work, M'Lady...absolutely! You sure do know about love and affection...MMmmm! Thank you, Debbie ~ Rascal
Duncan Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for your sweet words ;}
Guzzi Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Ohhh Lala..nice one..erotic and well done..tastefully done ;) You go gal! Light & Love
Duncan Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Thank you Debbie ;} I wrote this back in 1992 -93
Okoth Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 2:41 AM
Nice.
Duncan Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:21 AM
Thank you Edison ;}
Maverick Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Wheew this is a hottie alright Debbie, i must thank you for your great comment on the write of mine.
Nutter Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Feel the passion in this write, another excellent write.
Duncan Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Thank you Anthony,, I wrote it 1992,, have a great day ;}
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Very passionate work..Glad that I stopped by.I don't know about that musk scent though.Sara
Rhinem Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM
...I can feel your beauty inside of me baby * You feel sooo beautiful ~ My love, John!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Smile ˜ Ow Sweet Debbie, how fortunate to be loved by such lovely beauty ˜ Deep my beautiful lady ˜ Forever & for always, John!:) ˜
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 11:29 AM
Sweet and romantic love poem Debbie. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Thank you Annie ;} have a great day !
Nutter Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 5:08 AM
Nice love poem, you describe the desire so well.
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