Hold the Ice

HOLD THE ICE
A drunk ventured out onto the ice
Thought a trice on the ice would be nice
But the ice was too thin
With ice up to his chin
Called “Neat brandy for me; hold the ice!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 15, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Lol! Geoffrey, This is one funny limerick using the same word! Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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January 15, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Many thanks, Alexis.
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January 14, 2019 at 10:27 PM
This one made me LOL. Great limerick, Geoffrey! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
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January 14, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Charles.
Gauthier Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 6:42 PM
A fun limerick, Geoffrey.
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January 11, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Line
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January 10, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Hello Geoffrey Brewer, this poem made me smile. have a nice day my friend.
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January 11, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Darlene.
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