Hold On

i tell these dry leaves
do not get forced by the wind
enjoy the cool breeze


20 June 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/24/2021 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/28/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/23/2021 1:24:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/28/2021 10:49:00 AM
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:17:00 PM
Really nice, Chris! Congratulations on your POTD!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:14:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 3:52:00 PM
Hello Alexis Christuraj, this is a nice way of saying hold on. Very clever. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/23/2021 10:44:00 AM
Hello Alexis Christuraji, You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:14:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/22/2021 12:39:00 PM
The title says it all- "hold on". There is tenderness and peace within. Simply embrace the moment. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations Christuraj, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:14:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
great haiku, Alex, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:13:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/22/2021 11:37:00 AM
A good lesson for us all to take heed of, congratulations on poem of the day Christuraj. Well done! ~ Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:09:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. "Wonderful" Enjoy your win with blessings.................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:08:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 8:38:00 AM
Nice Haiku with a message.. Congrats on your POTD Christuraj... God bless... ~ Ani
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:07:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 8:25:00 AM
WoW! Christuraj, Your clever haiku just “ wowed” from start to finish. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:07:00 PM
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:07:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Christuraj.
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:13:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:34:00 AM
Thoughtful haiku, Chris! Congrats on POTD
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:16:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:31:00 AM
Christuraj, congrats on your POTD honor with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. I humbly accept your congrats. You make me grow.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:07:00 AM
Great seasonal haiku. I like the first person approach. Well deserved POTD Christuraj.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:15:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:15:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:16:00 AM
Wonderful metaphoric deep haiku, with delicate imagery, congratulations Alex on potd well deserved, cheers David
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:17:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 6:10:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, peace _Constance
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:17:00 PM
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 6:01:00 AM
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Date: 6/22/2021 4:28:00 AM
Congrats on POTD--a clever write.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 6/22/2021 1:08:00 AM
Back again with congrats on a well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
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Date: 6/22/2021 12:48:00 AM
Its always worth hanging on, things can only get better. Congratulations Christuraj on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 12:18:00 PM
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:48:00 AM
sweet metaphor, Chris
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2021 12:41:00 PM
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:57:00 AM
Oh, I love this excellent Haiku and the message. A fave :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2021 9:42:00 AM
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Date: 6/20/2021 7:00:00 AM
Good lesson in this haiku.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2021 9:42:00 AM
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Date: 6/20/2021 3:39:00 AM
Good motto for life ...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/20/2021 3:55:00 AM
Thank you very much.
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