Hold On

i tell these dry leaves
do not get forced by the wind
enjoy the cool breeze


20 June 2021
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
Alex Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:24 AM
Congrats on your POTD.
Alex Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you very much.
Kauffman Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Really nice, Chris! Congratulations on your POTD!
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Thank you very much.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 3:52 PM
Hello Alexis Christuraj, this is a nice way of saying hold on. Very clever. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Hello Alexis Christuraji, You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Thank you very much.
Nicole Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:39 PM
The title says it all- "hold on". There is tenderness and peace within. Simply embrace the moment. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Congratulations Christuraj, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Thank you very much.
Roper Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:21 PM
great haiku, Alex, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 11:37 AM
A good lesson for us all to take heed of, congratulations on poem of the day Christuraj. Well done! ~ Belle
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Thank you very much.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. "Wonderful" Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Thank you very much.
Jayasankar Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Nice Haiku with a message.. Congrats on your POTD Christuraj... God bless... ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you very much.
Y. Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 8:25 AM
WoW! Christuraj, Your clever haiku just “ wowed” from start to finish. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you very much.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thank you very much.
Hankins Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Christuraj.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thank you very much.
Seeker Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Thoughtful haiku, Chris! Congrats on POTD
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thank you very much.
Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:31 AM
Christuraj, congrats on your POTD honor with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Thank you very much. I humbly accept your congrats. You make me grow.
Rone Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Great seasonal haiku. I like the first person approach. Well deserved POTD Christuraj.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Andresen Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 6:36 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thank you very much.
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June 22, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Wonderful metaphoric deep haiku, with delicate imagery, congratulations Alex on potd well deserved, cheers David
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Thank you very much.
La France Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor, peace _Constance
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Thank you very much.
Sands Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 6:01 AM
Thank you very much.
Pandit Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 4:28 AM
Congrats on POTD--a clever write.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 1:08 AM
Back again with congrats on a well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:48 AM
Its always worth hanging on, things can only get better. Congratulations Christuraj on the honour of POTD. Tom
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Thank you very much.
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 10:48 AM
sweet metaphor, Chris
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thank you very much.
Sands Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Oh, I love this excellent Haiku and the message. A fave :)
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Good lesson in this haiku.
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Thank you very much.
Neumann Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Good motto for life ...
Alex Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:55 AM
Thank you very much.
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