Hold my hand 21-07-2026

Sunlight sparkles on the river,
marbled fire licking at the air.
Each glimmer erupts then fades
like people who we thought

we'd hold dear for an eternity
drifting into the world.
But if you tilt your head softly
you might hear their laughter

echoing beside your head,
like children sliding through your ears.
And if you close your eyes
you might feel gentle fingers

entwining into yours;
the summer wind clasping
its warm hands around your own.
And if only you'd look hard enough

they'll reappear, not in the water
but rather the night sky,
stars that shine steadfast.
Bask in their light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 3:03 PM
Hello Shane Zhao, it is so nice to meet you. I like the verses 3 4 and 5. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Smith  Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 7:54 PM
I like how each stanza flows into the next.
Zhao Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 2:16 AM
Hi Alison, thank you so much! I wanted it to mimic the theme of holding on to people through unbreaking memories :)
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