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Hold Me Until the Moon Releases

Hold me until the moon releases all her blueprint sphering love take me to the stars where light is warm and fitted like a glove bring me to safety on the shores of your passion inside a cove made for two, draw me to your arms of cinnamon and clove; Life is but a breath of love the ultimate action of good will by man nature is our kingdom and we are the Adam Eve's of God's big plan pluck me an apple from the bite of your desire leave me whole, like the wholesome sun of a morning full of sunlight rays extol; Love me with all of your heart or not at all for I am ready to moor capable and able to fly to you and be your everything and more hold me until the moon shines blue, upon the golden hue of you take me to the stars that shine and bathe me in your light anew.

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Date: 12/4/2020 9:09:00 AM
If only I could.I would. Wonderful writing. Enjoyed. Well done.
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Date: 12/3/2020 8:34:00 PM
The beauty of your moon is simply breath taking, love the last stanza the best!
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Date: 11/27/2020 5:55:00 PM
So glad you clicked commented and read one of my poems P.D. Because i got to read this. Arms of cinnamon clove Star shine moon anew Light and love I see and think a rainbow
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Date: 11/27/2020 11:45:00 AM
I feel the love. Thank you for your lovely poem
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:42:00 AM
You're singing through this love...like a waterfall into a pond...
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:42:00 AM
Beautifully romantic my friend. Your rhymes shine in love.
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:23:00 AM
Very nice. I felt like I was lost in this peaceful poem. Well done :)
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Date: 11/27/2020 7:17:00 AM
so many lovely romantic lines here Pixie.. sounds like heaven...
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Date: 11/27/2020 6:39:00 AM
Gorgeous!!! ~xomo
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Date: 11/27/2020 6:20:00 AM
Such graceful romance, Pixie!!
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